"I have tried simply to write the best I can. Sometimes I have good luck and write better than I can." -Ernest Hemingway

“The only living works are those which have drained much of the author's own life into them.” –Samuel Butler

Monday, June 20, 2011

Running Out of Time (Part One)


            Carmen’s eyes shot open and she braced her head to stop its constant spinning.  When her vision cleared, she looked around to find she was lying in an abandoned building.
            The room was shrouded in a dark hue and provided little protection from the pattering of the downpour outside. Rain drops rhythmically dripped through the patchy roof, uniting with the puddles below.
            As Carmen sat regaining her balance, she started to wonder why she was in this strange place.  She tried to remember what had happened but the harder she tried, the more apparent the black void in her memory became.
            Suddenly, Carmen’s phone chirped to life, startling her out of her contemplation. Tentatively reaching out her shaking hand, she managed to answer the call, “H-hello”
            “Ah, good. You are awake.” She heard the voice on the other end sneer.
            “Who are you? Where am I?” Carmen frantically asked.
            “It’s no matter. What does matter is the explosives strapped to your wrist, which I will gladly detonate if you don’t follow my instructions.”
            For the first time, Carmen peered down to her right wrist to see an odd contraption with a timer strapped there. Turning her wrist around, to get a better look at the device, she noticed, with a sinking heart, there was no way to easily detach it.
            The digital screen suddenly lit up and the clock started ticking down. Realizing she wasn’t listening to the demanding voice droning on through her phone, she started paying closer attention.
            “As you can see, I have given you an hour and forty-five minutes to retrieve this vase your father stole. You will now find it at the Wellington’s estate, I am sure you are familiar with them… Your first task is to steal this vase before your time runs out.” There was a brief pause before the voice continued. “Oh, and one more thing, if you try anything to double-cross me, I will not only blow you up, but also part of the National Independence Day Parade, today, on Constitution Avenue.  It would be too bad if so many innocent lives were lost.” Carmen jolted as she realized the ruthlessness of the voice.
            When she tried to protest, the call cut off.  In shock, Carmen blankly stared at the ground around her.

To Be Continued…

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